Writing & Improving In-app Messaging for a Financial Technology Company
I completed this project as a writing assessment for the PayPal interview process and does not reflect content officially published by PayPal Holdings, Inc.
Exercise One:
The following is an imaginary scenario in which I was tasked with writing in-app copy to reflect regional laws that require identity information collection prior to sending large sums of money. Using Figma, I developed the following screens:
The in-app messaging prompts users to provide further identification information (left) before sending $2,100 to another user. I maintained a casual and friendly voice to encourage a positive connection between the user and this block in capabilities. The first prompt (left) reads:
Let’s double check some details!
We noticed you’re trying to send [email] a payment of over $2,000. Help us transfer this money safely by confirming some personal details before sending this payment.
Once the user inputs their identification information, the next prompt (right) reads:
You made that look easy!
Your payment can now be submitted.
Exercise Two:
Write short yet engaging in-app messaging to welcome new users to the platform. Using Figma, I designed the following screen:
A pop-up message would appear upon logging into PayPal with a new account. The in-app messaging reads:
Hi Monique! Welcome to PayPal.
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